Your Science Deserves to Be Understood
You’ve written your Specific Aims page. The science is solid. But will reviewers understand it the way you intend? Every year, strong grants get triaged — not because the science was weak, but because the translation from the investigator’s mind to the reviewer’s understanding broke down. The Grant Translation Audit identifies exactly where those breakdowns are in your aims page and shows you how to fix them.
The 6 Things Included in Every Audit
Five Gaps Scorecard
Each of the Five Translation Gaps scored 1–5 with evidence from your text
NIH Framework Alignment
Assessment of how your aims page positions you for the 2025 Simplified Review Framework’s three factors
Line-by-Line Analysis
Your strongest and weakest sentences, paragraph by paragraph
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Priority Rewrite
Your weakest paragraph rewritten to show what closing the gap looks like
Revision Checklist
8–12 prioritized action items you can work through in a single revision session
Expert Commentary
Personal notes from Dr. Carter-Bawa drawing on her experience as a grant writer, reviewer, and behavioral scientist
Three Ways to Work With Me
Every package includes the complete audit of your Specific Aims Page — All 6 deliverables, nothing held back. The difference is your level of access to me.
The Single Audit ($147)
gives you the full diagnostic report of your Specific Aims Page
The Audit + Debrief ($247)
adds a 30-minute video call where we talk through your revision strategy together
The Audit + Debrief + Follow-Up ($397)
adds a second complete audit of your Specific Aims Page after you’ve revised, so you can see your scores improve before you submit
Dr. Lisa Carter-Bawa
I'm Dr. Lisa Carter-Bawa—a behavioral scientist, nurse practitioner, and researcher who has spent my career at the intersection of science, communication, and implementation. I've written grants that got funded. I've written grants that didn't. I've sat on review panels and watched brilliant science fail to land—not because the ideas weren't strong, but because something got lost in translation between the researcher's vision and the page. That gap is what the Translation Gap Framework addresses. After years of mentoring early career scientists, I developed this curriculum to teach what I wish someone had taught me: that grantsmanship isn't about performing for reviewers or following a formula. It's about returning to your authentic scientific voice and learning to communicate it with clarity and conviction. You don't need reinvention. You need a return. I'm honored to be part of your journey.
Curriculum
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Welcome to Your Grant Translation Audit
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How Your Audit Works
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Submit Your Specific Aims Page
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(Included in full purchase)
Schedule Your Debrief Call
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(Included in full purchase)
Submit Your Revised Aims Page (Follow-Up Package only)
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(Included in full purchase)
Your Work Is Safe
Your Specific Aims page is treated with complete confidentiality. It will not be shared, stored, or used for any purpose other than producing your audit report. Dr. Carter-Bawa reviews every audit personally before delivery.
I look forward to working with you!
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